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To make a good flash, you need to animate more than your intro. Try creating and developing characters. For good advice on character development, feel free to view my news post. It is very evident that this flash required no effort. I bet if you try next time, it won't get so many bad reviews.
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I don't like stick figures, so the limbs bothered me. Otherwise, this is one of the best stories on the site, synchronized perfectly with appropriate music. There aren't nearly enough good artists like you.
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I don't like loops, so you get points off for that.
Your intro was better than the flash itself. That's never a good sign. It proves to me that you have the talent to make decent flash, but you're not using it.
The overall quality of this film was terrible. You drew hexagons with clocks in them. The clocks weren't even moving. I know you can produce a background and maybe a story, but you didn't. Please try harder next time.
For additional advice on how to improve your flash, feel free to look at my latest news post.
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I cannot stress this enough. You need to finish your work. I was really enjoying it until it whited out.
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All you need to do is work on your characters' movements. They seemed stiff.
I really liked your music choice.
The story is great. I can't wait to see the next one.
Author's Response:
I mean to keep them that way, all my cartoons feature characters done in that "stiff" style. It allows me to worry more about the look of them and to minimize the amount of animation I need to do, which I don't like.
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The story is exactly the same with smaller consequences.
The game is good, but nearly impossible. If the difficulty on the first level was reduced, we could all move forward. Other than that, I like your game a lot.
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These are hilarious. You need to make more of these.
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That was one of the worst things I've ever seen.
It was also one of the funniest! I like the "voice" acting. That's unique.
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"do better if you want to get your point across"
Since this is spam, this leads me to believe that you also submit spam to the forums which reduces your credibility. If you have complaints about the site, email someone from the site. The rest of us genuinely don't care that you got banned. I believe that more people should get banned for this type of crap. If you have a major complaint, make a good movie about it instead of this junk.
To stay within the site rules, I will provide constructive feedback. First, try adding a plot. You could make it autobiographical and express how you felt as a result of your ban. Second, I don't like stick figures since they require no talent to draw. Replace the main character with one that has depth. A great way to add depth is to shade the character's clothing, which you should also add. Third, you should add voice acting to help personify your character. Fourth, your choice of plot resolution decides how your viewers will ultimately judge your plot. You provide a problem, yet you fail to provide a form of resolution other than being angry.
Author's Response:
You would think this flash would be blammed for all those reasons but no. (And I didn't ask anyone to auto 5 my flash either)
I already knew and completely agree with everything you said by the way.
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I liked the mix of animation and reality. You did a great job! Even the audio was synced perfectly. I wish more animators would put this effort into their work.
Author's Response:
me too. all it takes is like 20-30 extra minutes and a few hundred double checks.
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