Score: 0

"terrible"

submission: [SS] kbai

date: February 6, 2008

To make a good flash, you need to animate more than your intro. Try creating and developing characters. For good advice on character development, feel free to view my news post. It is very evident that this flash required no effort. I bet if you try next time, it won't get so many bad reviews.

Score: 10

"among the best"

submission: Saving Lily

date: February 6, 2008

I don't like stick figures, so the limbs bothered me. Otherwise, this is one of the best stories on the site, synchronized perfectly with appropriate music. There aren't nearly enough good artists like you.

Score: 0

"bad flash"

submission: rupeeclock buys a niggour

date: January 12, 2008

I don't like loops, so you get points off for that.

Your intro was better than the flash itself. That's never a good sign. It proves to me that you have the talent to make decent flash, but you're not using it.

The overall quality of this film was terrible. You drew hexagons with clocks in them. The clocks weren't even moving. I know you can produce a background and maybe a story, but you didn't. Please try harder next time.

For additional advice on how to improve your flash, feel free to look at my latest news post.